waxpersons's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Provenance.]

Great work on the panel, but the punch at the end of the joke is a bit bland. Good work anyways, I enjoy most of your humorous comics.

[Old is Sold !!!]

Quality Jalopy, great work, incredible detail. But next time try going for a smaller sized picture when submitting to newgrounds. The regular view im seeing right now is kind of small, which is standard on new grounds, but when I click to zoom in the picture is way too big, only a corner of the car takes up my whole screen. Im going to let this slide in my rating but remember that presentation is everything.

[Befreckled]

Not bad, in fact pretty good. Nice detail and colors. I like the style of the body, although the shoulders and neck don't seem fit the proportions you're going for. Other than that, very nice sketch.

JackieBlue responds:

Thanks! My style is very much a work in progress so I appreciate the honesty.

[Daah Truuf Abound Us]

.... I believe .....

cool sketch.

[Desert Battle Suit]

badass mech dude!

[Subkultur]

Wild designs man, cant wait to read this comic.

[Priest man]

DEM EYEZ MAN! anyways cool work, nice simplicity, but I feel that this would look amazing on canvas with real paint.

Shotgunmadmax responds:

Thank you very much dood

[Althea]

Nice work, very magical. Good detail in the facial features but the legs seem to be a bit disproportiante, it almost looks like she is bowlegged.

MissLace responds:

Thank you. If you see how her hands and torso are, she is meant to be twisting her body in her stance slightly. I was trying to go for a twisting effect and having her (viewers left) leg slightly farther back than the (viewers right), it was a problem for me though, I guess I was right thinking that it looked wrong haha. Sadly since it was for a contest I didn't have the time to fix it. Thanks again for your comment.

[Mellisa Clarke]

Although it seems unfinished, your shading is very well done, especially with the use of pen. On the other hand, her fingers could use some more work (pun not intended).

[Kayleigh Package]

A decent character design, you have a good sense of detail but the body is a bit disproportionate. Also I suggest dropping the overly anime eyes, they really take away from the rest of the face and are generally unoriginal and unnecessary.

Drawesometoons responds:

Well, it was requested that way. And the proportion is just my style. But thanks for your Review. (: